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I Am John's Stomach Pains. On The Precipice of Mediocrity, Teetering |
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![]() Thursday, October 13, 2005 Immoral Past Since last night I told you about a pretty unselfish act, I thought I'd show you a pretty craptastical poem I wrote in college, detailing one of my not-so-shining moments growing up. Keep in mind, this was for a creative writing class... poetry was never my strong-suit, and it was an assignment. Also, since Blogger doesn't allow tabs or extra spaces, some of the structure is lost (think e.e. cummings), but it's close enough for a quick read. Weak I remember Hearing "We all want to be Obi-wan"; and believing "But the truth is there's Vader in us, too"; and not believing Foolish I could have tried harder It didn't let me I blame it on the dark side But no When push came to shove Foolish I have to cave, under the hot early morning flashlight I saw the leather Lying. Baking. Begging. To be taken To be returned I tried. Why won't you believe me I really tried Just not enough. So I bought toys Dinner Comic books Even gas So while he ponders I stroll, assuaging the creeping guilt Judging a book by a dirty cover What kind of seventeen year old moron loses a wallet Three hundred dollars, chump I've waded in darkness Again. posted by Holz | 10:02 AM | Rant & Rave, Bitches! (4) 4 Comments:
I say you should have gone to the Tashy Station to pick up some power converters. By Stan, at 10/13/2005 10:47 AM Yea ever since the okjtmj came out they just arent in demand. By Larakin, at 10/13/2005 12:34 PM
I think you're too defensive. Granted, I'm not a great judge of poetry, but I liked it. By Manchild, at 10/13/2005 2:49 PM
Mom, how did you get MC's password? By Holz, at 10/13/2005 3:08 PM |
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